Golden Hill by Francis Spufford
There's never a long discussion to report when we unanimously love a book - there's no disagreement and no criticism of the book
itself - and this choice of Doug's was a prime example. Spufford is known to have wanted to write an 'eighteenth-century novel' set in
New York, and we felt that in Golden Hill he has succeeded magnificently.
It opens in 1746 as Smith, a likeable and hapless young Englishman cast in the mould of the male protagonists of eighteenth-century
picaresque novels, disembarks in New York, then a small town on the tip of Manhattan Island, and makes without delay for the house of a
merchant, with an order for a thousand pounds that he wishes to cash. Needless to say, this causes a huge stir. Can he be trusted? And
what does he intend to do with such a great sum (which in fact isn't that readily available as cash, causing the banker problems)? -
that for most of the book both the inhabitants of the town and the reader are kept asking. In true eighteenth-century picaresque fashion,
we follow his adventures as he is variously wooed by the inhabitants and punished for his lack of verification - at one point ending up,
in a highly vivid episode, in jail - and becoming romantically entangled with the headstrong spinster daughter of the merchant Lovell.
The whole novel is entirely vivid, packed with the physical and social details of the town, colonised at the time by the Dutch and English.
Spufford is a historian, and it is therefore no surprise that he should be armed with such knowledge, but what we found remarkable was
the way that there is absolutely no sense of research - the novel simply lives and breathes the time and place in which it is set. We are
never explicitly told, for instance, that smallpox took a while to be brought from Europe to the New World; instead we are shown the fact
briefly but vividly through Smith's amazement, on first seeing the Lovell daughters, that their faces are completely unpocked. We felt
delighted by such things. The novel is full of energy and extremely humane, touching and funny in its depiction of Smith and his
antagonists, and we all agreed that we had found it great fun.
Someone, I think Clare, did say that she tired a little of the eighteenth-century locutions, but Doug and I thought that Spufford
had created a remarkably successful hybrid register for his narrator, which is both drenched in eighteenth-century flavour yet reads
with complete ease to modern eyes and ears.
But why, one might ask - and I did ask before I started reading - write a pastiche of an eighteenth-century novel? Spufford's
agenda is in fact modern, and indeed political. It would give the game away to say in precisely what way, but suffice it to say that
the injection of the issues of homosexuality and race into the template of the eighteenth-century novel makes for searing historical
and literary comment. Following indeed in the mode of eighteenth-century novels, there is in fact explicit - and funny - comment
on the novel form, other novelists of the eighteenth century, and novelistic modes. At the commencement of a card game of piquet,
the narrator says - tongue firmly in cheek and clearly mocking those contemporary writers who wear their research on their sleeves:
'Now, it will be most necessary for the reader, in comprehending what followed, to possess a thorough and secure understanding of
the rules of piquet,' but in trying to provide it bursts out: 'Wait - wait - alas the explanation is bungled, but it cannot be recalled
and started over again, for the game has begun.' Similarly, while relating the progress of a sword fight: 'But really, this is useless,
and no more enables the reader to see the battle than if I shouted numbers at you; which, indeed, I appear to be doing. The truth is,
I am obliged to copy these names for sword-fighting out of a book, having no direct experience to call upon. I throw myself upon
the reader's mercy, or rather their sense of resignation.'
There is a final twist at the end of this book worthy of any contemporary postmodern novel (I won't give it away) which tickled us all.
We could see holes in it, but we didn't mind; like the impossible way that Smith, writing to his father in prison, manages somehow -
presumably with an inkwell and feather! - to take down a verbatim record of the raving speech of a fellow inmate even as it's happening
- it felt like part of the joke that this whole book is - a joke, however, with a serious and deeply humane message.
The Men's Club by Leonard Michaels
I was waiting for a train on Dalkey station when I opened this 1981 novel now reissued by Daunt Books, and was so bowled over
by the prose that then and there I was fired to start a new publishing company in order to publish such prose myself. (Next day I saw
the folly of such a thought: last time I was a publisher I ended up having no time or headspace to write, so I won't quickly be making
that mistake again.)
However, the book struck fewer sparks for our reading group back in England.
In a spare, ironic prose, the unnamed narrator, a Berkeley academic, recounts an evening meeting in the late 1970s to which he was
invited and reluctantly attended, a male answer to the proliferating women's consciousness-raising groups of the time.
But I was thinking about good company. Some of my married colleagues had love affairs, usually with students. You could call it
a regular social possibility. It included emotional chaos. Gonorrhoea. Even guilt. They would have been better off in a men's club.
Present at the meeting are his academic colleague and ex-basketball player Cavanaugh, a psychotherapist, a doctor, a real-estate
executive, a lawyer and a businessman. Nervous at first of each other and the situation, and of the apparent requirement to discuss
their lives, the men eventually loosen up over marijuana and a whole case of Zinfandel and more, and in a Canterbury-Tales type
scenario (one of the men is significantly called Canterbury) they unwittingly reveal their own lack of emotional intelligence by telling
tales of their encounters with women, several of them adulterous. Finally, in a desecration of the women's ritual they are aping, they
raid the fridge of the huge spread prepared by the host's wife for her meeting the following evening, wreck the room, engage in
occasional and vaguely homoerotic bouts of aggression towards each other, throw knives at a door and end up as one band beating
their chests and howling like wolves.
Although everyone in our group agreed, I think, that the prose was stunning, there were some criticisms from, interestingly, the
men among us, and also some differences in the ways they had read the book. John was perturbed by the fact that the book, dealing
with such a serious subject - the lack of maturity and responsibility of apparently professional men - failed to engage him emotionally,
a point with which everyone agreed: the ironic prose and objective stance of the narrator leaves one feeling distanced. For Doug this
was not a problem, as he had read the whole thing as a broad comedy which had made him laugh out loud: it was the only way he
could read it, he said, because otherwise it would have been just too horrific. Mark hadn't read it like that at all. He had indeed found it
horrific but, from the perspective of the present day, unbelievable: any group of professional men beginning to behave like that
in this day and age would have immediately been shown the door, and would never do so in the first place, and he took John to
task for choosing what he considered an old-fashioned and irrelevant book. He did think that the stories the men told had worked
very well, but he had no time for the overall narrative context in which they were placed. I felt a little baffled by this last, as the
meanings of the stories are opaque to their narrators and they are often unfinished: the whole point therefore is the context
of the stories, and what they reveal about their narrators. Ann went so far as to wonder if Michaels had had a series of stories
up his sleeve that were all too similar - there are similarities: all of the men are similarly dense about and baffled by women -
and simply found this way of stringing them together.
There is indeed perhaps a difficulty in knowing how this book should be read. Because of the distanced and ironic stance
of the narrator, it is hard to see much separation between narrator and author, yet at the end the narrator joins in wholeheartedly
with the behaviour of the other men. (John said that the other book of Michaels' that he had read, Sylvia, had the same effect:
he wasn't sure that the author of Sylvia didn't identify with the self-centred and sexist protagonist). Consequently it's possible
to interpret The Men's Club not as a criticism of the primitive and immature character of men, but, for instance,
as Kirkus Reviews decided, as a sly sendup of 'women's lib' novels.
Butcher's Crossing by John Williams
John thought it pretty ironic that after criticising his choice of
The Men's Club as an old-fashioned and
irrelevant portrayal of men
and masculinity, Mark should immediately suggest a Western.
In fact, John Williams didn't want his publisher to label Butcher's Crossing as such, and thus fix it in a genre pigeonhole, and
having read and generally admired his later and best-known book, Stoner,
the rest of us
in the group expected a subversion of the genre
along the lines we had found in Cormac McCarthy's later and magnificent Blood Meridian
To some extent our expectations were fulfilled. The chief way in which Butcher's Crossing subverts the genre, and which must
have seemed fairly radical at the time of first publication (1960), is to portray the Wild West as utterly devoid of heroism and glamour,
to present it rather as a numbing world of grime, hard graft and constant near-death. Protagonist Will Andrews is a university drop-out,
a devotee of Emerson, filled with the vague and romantic notion of finding in the Wild West a truer life and his own truer self. In 1873
he comes to Butcher's Crossing, a new shanty settlement erected for the trade in buffalo hides. Due to the overhunting of buffalo,
the source of hides is beginning to dry up, but it turns out that the hardbitten hunter Miller knows of a hidden untouched valley
in the Rocky Mountains where the buffalo still roam en masse. In pursuit of his personal mission, Andrews sinks a good deal of his
inheritance in equipping a hunting expedition by Miller, himself and two others to this valley.
We now embark with the four men on a gruelling trek with horses and oxen-pulled wagon as the stubborn Miller insists on
leaving the watercourse for a straight course towards the mountains across a baking plain, seems to lose his way, endangering their
lives, and eventually finds it. Following the perspective of the neophyte Andrews, we are taken through the minutiae of every gruelling
process, the setting up of camps, the handling of the animals, the preparation and cooking of the meagre food, and the physical
discomfort as they ride, Andrews' thighs chafing, in the baking sun. Finally they reach the mountains and - again, after worrying
uncertainty - find the valley, and new gruelling experiences are in store: firstly, for Andrews, the killing and skinning of the buffalo,
and then, for all of the others, the obsession of Miller who is unable to stop shooting the buffalo which, unused to men, simply stand
to be picked off. The skins pile up, far more than they will ever be able to carry back on the wagon, and the autumn creeps on,
bringing snow that will trap them in the valley all winter...
Andrews' reaction to all of this - his initial shock and his slow numbing - create a psychological dimension that is another
subversion of the Western genre, but the whole thing is in many ways extremely traditional, a heavily event-based linear narrative
with everything described objectively in the minutest detail. Doug, Jenny and I had found much of the detail very interesting -
everyone was as fascinated as Andrews by the way Miller made bullets, for instance - but we all felt that there was far more of it
than was necessary in a narrative, and that its accumulation amounted to tedium. For this reason Ann and John had both given up
on the book fairly early on. I have to say it took me ages to read it - I found myself reading really slowly - and Jenny said that she
hadn't actually liked it as she found the graphic descriptions - of the skinning of the buffalo, for instance - unpleasant to read.
Doug and I were both amazed by the description of the way the buffalo behaved and fell once they had been shot, but I said that
at that point I wondered: is it actually true, or is it simply a feat of imagination on the part of the author? I then realised that the
book was prompting me to read it in the wrong way, ie as a manual rather than a fiction, and I felt I'd rather read the source
material myself in order to know the veracity of what was being described. There was one moment when I stopped reading at
the inappropriateness of such description. As a life-threatening blizzard comes down on the men, Miller frantically struggles
to create shelters out of buffalo hide, and the way that he does so is described minutely in a way that is simply not compatible
with the panicking psychology of the occasion - Andrews would probably have had difficulty even seeing what Miller was doing,
leave alone carefully noting the process.
It was also thought that, in spite of Andrews' psychological journey, the other men were stock Western characters - Miller the
tacit gritty John Wayne type, Schneider the bad-tempered loose cannon, and Charlie Hogue, the Bible-reading drunk driving the wagon.
I said that for all that actually happens in the book event-wise, and the simplicity of the psychology, it could have been done as a
short story rather than the 330+ page book that it is. On the other hand, it would have been difficult via a short story to recreate the
gruelling tedium which the length of this book certainly does, and there was a brief discussion of the difficulty of writing about tedium
without actually being tedious.
People also started to feel that there wasn't as much veracity as at first seemed: why, if Miller was such a brilliant hunter, did he
make the mistakes he did? Wouldn't he have known, for instance, not to pile the wagon so high with skins for the homeward journey
- as I read it, I was thinking, no, no, I wouldn't pile it that high! - and wouldn't he have known that the river would have been too swollen
with melting spring snow to cross with the wagon, and wouldn't he have avoided doing so? Clearly the authorial purpose was to subvert
the way that in the traditional Western heroic cowboys always defeat the odds, but we felt it wasn't actually psychologically or factually
realistic that Miller would get in such a situation. Why, if every detail of how the men subsisted had to be told, were the facts of
defecation and urination left out, and why was Andrews, who had lived in the wild with these men for six months or more, prissily
shocked when asked to urinate with the others in a kettle to soften leather for thongs? It seemed a bit like the squeamishness of an
academic author... And when Andrews, who has for months been in close contact with dying buffalo, hunkers down in his buffalo-hide
sleeping bag to withstand the blizzard, why is this the first time that he feels a parasitic insect crawl on his skin and bite him?
People were very affected by the fact that when Andrews finally gets back to Buffalo Crossing and bathes, the dirt peels off him
in scrolls and he is revealed to be covered in insect bites, but wouldn't he in fact be covered in living ticks and lice? And how did
the horses and oxen survive when they had to be let loose in the valley for the winter, any grass left from the hot summer long
buried in deep banks of snow? And, as Jenny said, where were the wild animals? Charlie Hogue lays strychnine for wolves, but
they never see any, and why is there no mention of mountain lions or bears?
And where, asked Mark in provocative disappointment, were the Indians? (Although it was he who had suggested the book,
circumstances had prevented him from reading it after all.) Jenny, laughing, told him off for his diction, and John - previously accused
by Mark as a purveyor of old-fashioned masculinity - snorted. We did then however consider the lack of Native Americans encountered
on the men's journey. At one point a small group near a watercourse watch passively as the expedition goes by, and Miller comments
that they are 'not worth killing any more'. The implication is that the Native Americans had been defeated and cleared from the area
before 1873 when the action of the novel takes place, but in view of the doubts we had above, and the fact that Native Americans
defeated the army at the Battle of Little Bighorn only three years later, people wondered about the veracity of this too.
As John said, the theme of this novel mirrors that of Stoner in which the protagonist survives a life of disappointments through
sheer stoicism. Butcher's Crossing ends in disappointment, and Andrews' mistaken idealism has been replaced by a stoical
understanding of the futility of much human endeavour. However, although no one could deny that the prose of this book
is superb, spare and understated but vivid and ringing with clarity, and that the descriptions of landscape and weather were
breathtaking, as John also said, it lacks the passion of the (presumably more autobiographical) Stoner which by comparison
is Williams' masterpiece.
The Handmaid's Tale by Margaret Atwood
This was a bit of a whole-group choice, made in the absence of Trevor, who had been meant to make the next suggestion, and prompted
I suppose by the recent MGM/Hulu TV adaptation. Since Ann was next in line to choose, she stepped in and took on the task of kicking
off our discussion.
In the past there seems to have been a bit of a reluctance in the group to read books by Margaret Atwood (one of my absolutely favourite
writers), I'm not sure why. John has considered her a bit 'long-winded' - he reveres economy above all, and her books do indeed tend to
be lengthy, and packed with lush detail (none of which I consider extraneous, however). There is a bit of a resistance in our group to
authors who it is felt have been over-hyped, yet we have read several books by male authors you might say would come in that category,
and I have suspected there to be a bit of an unconscious prejudice against Atwood as an overtly feminist writer - she was once
published by Virago, and her early books deal most pointedly with feminist issues. The one book of hers we did read as a group was
the early and shorter Surfacing, but it didn't go down particularly well,
being found to be rather feminist-mystical. However, people
had clearly been very impressed by the recent TV series of The Handmaid's Tale, and they all wanted to read the book.
Written in 1984, it is set in a dystopian future when pollution and radiation in America have affected fertility and given rise to
a fundamentalist-Christian police state, The Republic of Gilead, in which women have been entirely stripped of all rights and autonomy
and those few fertile educated women co-opted, after the Biblical Leah, to bear children for barren ruling couples. Such women, of
whom our first-person protagonist, Offred, is one, are virtual prisoners in these households, their only tasks to shop for the household
once a day with an assigned handmaid partner, in their regulation voluminous red gowns and the white wings that eclipse their view of
the world and prevent eye contact and discussion, watched over at various checkpoints by armed guards, and once a month to take
part in the 'ceremony', in which, while the wife holds her, the husband performs the task of fertilisation. Reading is forbidden, and
communication with others is dangerous - police informers, the 'Eyes', are everywhere. Handmaids are stripped of all identity
and given the household patronymic - in this case, 'Of Fred'.
Ann said that she had never read the book before, but was very glad she now had. She said that she had read it in one sitting
on a five-and-a-half hour journey, and was immensely impressed, and wanted now to read it again as she felt that there were layers
and layers to be mined in the book.
The air of menace is acute and there are sheer horrors - such as the hangings of subversives and renegade women - yet as Ann said
there is such a light verbal touch - Atwood is a mistress of irony - that it is immensely readable. Indeed, it is Offred's intelligence
and perception, and her irony and spirit of resistance that promote in the reader an ultimate sense of optimism.
Everyone in the room agreed, and felt the book was a masterpiece. Ann said that most remarkable was the prescience of the book,
written in 1984 but resonating so strongly with the rise of right-wing factions today. Mark thought that the book must have been even
more striking when it came out in 1985, but I have to say that in fact I found the book much more shocking and urgent this time round.
In 1985 I read it much more as a projection and warning, but in the light of recent political events it seems much closer to home.
Offred constantly looks back on her life before the Republic of Gilead, so we learn how people's rights were peeled away,
and everyone agreed that one of the things they found most frightening in the book was the moment when 'Offred' discovers
that her electronic cash card no longer works: everyone with 'F' against their name on the database has been stripped of their
financial existence at the press of a button. It is worth noting that in 1985 credit cards were not electronic, nor as essential a part
of our daily financial transactions as they are either now or in the book; touch-screen cards, such as Offred had, were undreamt of
(except of course by Margaret Atwood). In 1985 I didn't think too much about this detail, but reading the book now and thinking of
how all our financial transactions are instantly location-recorded, we all felt a distinct chill. Prescience, indeed.
Any accusations of crude anti-male feminism were roundly dispelled by this book. As Mark pointed out, men as well as women suffer in this
patriarchal regime, male subversives rounded up and left to hang as public warnings, and the male members of the ruling class,
including the head of Offred's household, the high-up 'Commander', are not immune to slipping up and dire punishment.
Offred's view of the Commander is complex, encompassing his humanity, and her sexuality too complicated and subtle
for the over-simplistic feminism of her long-lost mother and her feisty friend turned subversive fellow handmaid Moira.
Ann said that the fictional 'Historical Notes' that end the book also contribute to a sense of optimism, as they are the transcript
of a conference taking place some hundred and fifty years after the events of Offred's story, and in which the Republic of Gilead
is discussed as a long-gone historical phenomenon. The speaker discusses the provenance of 'The Handmaid's Tale' we have just
read, and which exists in the form of once-subterfuge tape recordings, and speculates on the veracity and significance of the things
it describes. Jenny felt that one purpose was to illustrate the contingency and incompleteness of history, and I felt that an important
point was to show how difficult it is, from another era or culture, to empathise with the experience of cruel regimes, or see their
relevance to ourselves - whereas the searing nature of the tale we have just read shows the urgent necessity of doing so.
So, a book we were all deeply affected by. And as Mark said, Margaret Atwood is very, very clever.
(Also let it be recorded here that I had a signed hardback first edition, which I lent to one of my son's schoolfriends and never got back
- not that I begrudge it; I'm pretty pleased for it to have entered his life and mental landscape.)
The Fishermen by Chigozie Obioma
Clare suggested this book which has received much acclaim and was shortlisted for the Booker Prize. It is the tale of four young
brothers in the west-Nigerian village of Akura in the 1990s, whose middle-class family falls apart after their disciplinarian father is
moved away for his work and the boys then run wild. While fishing in the polluted, forbidden and 'cursed' river, they encounter the
village homeless 'madman' Abulu who is credited by the locals with the power of prophecy, and who tells them that fifteen-year-old
Ikenna, the eldest of the four, will die a horrible death at the hands of his brothers. The effect of this on Ikenna is to make him so
distrustfully withdrawn from his brothers that the stage is set for the fulfilment of the prophecy. The tale is related by the youngest
of the four, Benjamin, partly via his adult retrospective viewpoint and partly through his nine-year-old perceptions at the time.
Clare said that although she had found the book a fairly easy read and interesting, and the narrator likeable, she had been surprised,
in view of the book's reception, to find it in fact not very well written, and she wondered if some kind of cultural special pleading were
All of the rest of us had felt the same, and we now wondered: was this the case, that the book was less than well written, or,
since we were so out of line with general opinion, were we suffering cultural blindness?
Reviewers have particularly praised the prose which is vividly and concretely metaphoric, each chapter beginning with a
metaphoric announcement - 'Father was an eagle', 'Mother was a falconer', 'Ikenna was a snake', etc - which is elaborated for
the rest of the chapter and picked up again throughout the book, and reviewers have found this inventive and vivid.
Narrator Benjamin explains early on that a metaphoric or symbolic mode is characteristic of the Igbo language (which the
parents speak to the boys as well as English):
...it was ... the way our language - Igbo - was structured, for although the vocabulary for literal construction for cautionary
expressions such as 'be careful' was available, they said 'Jiri eze gi ghuo onu gi onu' - Count your teeth with your tongue.
That phrase, 'Count your teeth with your tongue', presented as a typical Igbo aphorism, is certainly very apt - counting your
teeth with your tongue would certainly render it unable to engage in rash speech - and it has the witty virtue of economy.
Obioma's metaphors are however extremely elaborate, and while the pictures they conjure are indeed vivid, they are often irrelevant
to or even cut across the meaning intended. On the first page we are told that the brothers' parents are the 'ventricles of our home'
- an obscure enough metaphor (what kind of ventricles?) to require elaboration:
'when ... [they] held silence as the ventricles of the heart retain blood, we could flood the house if we poked them.'
Yes, parents are the heart of a home (a somewhat cliched notion, in fact), but ventricles? The elaboration of the metaphor is
so concretely particular that you are forced to think in a very concrete way about the parallels being drawn: ventricles are two of
four chambers of a heart, and they don't exactly retain blood, they pump it on. And the image of a heart
speared conjures the notion of death, making the metaphor overwrought for what we
are in fact being told is a habitual parent-child relationship.
In the next paragraph we learn of the mother's distress at the father's sudden and imminent departure:
'...crumbs of information began to fall from Mother's soliloquy like tots of feathers from a richly-plumed bird', a mixed metaphor
(crumbs = feathers) that had me putting down the book laughing (and not wanting to bother going on), inured to the mother's
distress, and trying to get my head around the idea of a soliloquy being like a richly plumed bird. (In retrospect I thought that
maybe it was the mother who was meant to be like a richly plumed bird, but that's not what the sentence, grammatically, says.)
One chapter begins: 'Boja was a fungus', and the very next sentence proclaims with a lack of metaphoric logic:
'His body was filled with fungi.'
There were other things that seemed to us like either infelicities of language or authorial failures of imagination. A procession
'zipped' while 'plodding ponderously', a branch is 'foliated with leaves' (ie 'leafed with leaves'), grave diggers dig 'quicker' but with
'a bewildering air of apathy', and at one point Mother is 'visibly ripped inside-out'.
The book has been praised for its accomplished storytelling, which, it is generally agreed, borrows from the African oral tradition.
However, it seemed to us that there were narrative structural techniques available to both oral and written storytelling that this book
failed to use, with a loss of required dramatic tension. Very often a crucial feature of a scene - crucial to the story - will not be
revealed during the portrayal of the scene but will be reported afterwards, thus losing the dramatic impact it could have had.
A significant example is the narrative handling of the making of the prophecy and Ikenna's early reaction to it. Ikenna begins
withdrawing from his brothers very early on in the book, but we, the readers, do not learn why until Page 84 when the horrific
scene in which Abulu makes the prophecy is related in flashback. Yet this omission is not justified
by Ben's nine-year-old naivety, as some reviewers have implied. Early on in the novel we witness a scene at the river in which
Ikenna has begun to act strangely.
He is actually asked by one of the boys present if he is upset because of 'that day you met Abulu', which prompts Ben to think
about that encounter, at which he was present - though he doesn't reveal anything about it to the reader - and to ponder
briefly the fact that their brother Obembe suggested the connection with the change in Ikenna. It appears to be a deliberate
choice by the author to keep the details of that encounter from the reader, as, rather obviously, and oddly for the reader,
Benjamin is quickly distracted from pondering it. It seems a strange narrative choice, as knowledge of the prophecy would
have provided for the reader a dramatic tension and sense of doom that is absent up to page 84. Once the prophecy is revealed
to the reader, it is pressed home with such insistence and is so much the motivating force behind the action playing out between
the brothers, that Benjamin's apparently epiphanic realisation late on in the novel that Abulu may be the cause of Ikenna's fate
seems both overstated and inconsistent or disingenuous.
Overstatement and repetition appear throughout the book, and while they may indeed be acceptable characteristics of oral
storytellling, as features of a 300-page printed novel aimed at a Western literary audience, they struck us as naive. The inclusion
at the front of the book of a map of Akura, Obioma's own home village, with named streets and buildings that are not even mentioned
in the book, seems another mark of naivety.
One particular scene seemed to point to an overall lack of narrative skill. After Benjamin and Obembe have taken horrific
revenge against Abulu, and before going back into the house, they take off their blood-stained shirts and throw them away over
the fence. When they get in the pastor is with their mother and they are forced to take part in a prayer session before they can
escape to their room. Once they are in their room we are told that they had put their shorts on inside out in order to 'conceal
the bloodstains', which immediately raised the following questions: Why was this fact not included in the scene outside the house
(it would be a bigger operation to take off shorts, turn them inside out and put them on again, than to whip off shirts, and it would
thus in fact be a more salient aspect of the scene)? And wouldn't the mother, who had been curious about their shirtlessness and
would therefore have been peering at their appearance, have noticed that their shorts were on inside out? And wouldn't blood
have soaked through presumably cotton shorts, and therefore have been visible to the mother anyway? It is as if the author,
having failed to fully imagine the scene outside the house (or indeed, by extension, the revenge scene) had realised only later that
there would have been blood on the shorts, and had had to make up (inadequately) for the omission. (Doug also said that in spite
of the extended description of the weapons the boys construct for attacking Abulu, he simply couldn't envisage them or precisely
how they were used, and others agreed - so in spite of the lengthy description we found a lack of vividness.)
Ann commented that this indicated a lack of editing, and we wondered if this was yet another aspect of over-positive discrimination.
Jenny now wondered again however if it was inappropriate to be applying our Western literary expectations, and if the way this novel
is written is simply 'the African way'. Others of us thought there were dangers of patronisation and indeed racism in this attitude -
ie that of assuming African literature to be necessarily naive, insular and unreconstructed. Obioma is in fact on record as seeing the
'narrative arc' as crucial to storytelling, and, indeed, two generations earlier another Igbo Nigerian, Chinua Achebe, was using the
narrative arc of Western culture to an extent and a rationality of prose with a sophistication that this novel fails to do. It is after all
oral storytelling that is the traditional 'African way', and, as Obioma himself has stated in interviews, novels written in English by
Africans like himself are necessarily Western and move away from that old culture. In fact, The Fishermen is full of self-conscious
accommodations for its Western audience, such as its description of the characteristics of Igbo language quoted above, and its
(somewhat clumsily inserted) explanation of the Harmattan:
Then, in late October, the Harmattan - a season when the dry dusty wind from the Sahara desert of Northern Nigeria travelled
and covered most of sub-Saharan Africa - seemed to have appeared overnight...
The book does have sophisticated aims, which reviewers have jumped on. Obioma explicitly invites comparison with distinguished
antecedents, echoing the title of Achebe's Things Fall Apart in the text, and having Obembe directly compare his own and Benjamin's
situation to that of Achebe's protagonist Onkonwo. Another parallel made explicitly within the text is with Cain and Abel. In interview,
Obioma has called the book 'an African version of tragedy'. More than one reviewer has tried to draw a parallel with Greek tragedy
by citing as the hubristic fatal flaw the ambition of the boys' father Ebe for them - he wants a lot of children (the four boys
have two younger siblings) and for them to be Western-educated
and become 'fishermen of good dreams ... who will ... become successful: doctors, pilots, professors, lawyers'. It's actually more
complex than that: in fact, Ikenna's superstition operates more dynamically as a fatal flaw. (Meanwhile some have praised the novel
for its psychological depth in tracing Ikenna's disintegration, but we found no psychological depth, since Ikenna's superstitious
reaction is simply stated as fact and his behaviour observed from outside - as, indeed, in Greek tragedy.) While courting a
Western audience, Obioma is on record as having called the book a 'wake-up call to Nigeria' and Nigerian politics do indeed form
a backdrop to the action. Ebe is passionate about his boys receiving a Western education, yet the family is overtaken and
destroyed by an old mode of superstition - the fatal flaw is perhaps rather the imposition of a Western colonising political
situation and ethos on what Obioma himself has called an 'inherently superstitious' people.
So, are the style and construction of the book intended as a formal illustration of this, the way that old superstitions break
through Westernisation? Or, as someone in the group said, are they an unfortunate pandering to a patronising and potentially
racist Western view of African literature as charmingly exotic and primitive? Or is it simply that, as Clare had originally felt, on
the level of style and structure the book does not match its author's ambitious and commendable and political aims?
We tended, I'm afraid, to conclude that last, and although Jenny said that she was glad to have read it, she had to admit that
she wouldn't have carried on with it had she not had to for the group, and everyone else apart from Clare had said they had
really struggled with it.
On a final note, however, Doug said he had really loved the depiction of the mother - a really great character.